I have made some significant revisions to The Death of the Death of Death, which I believe tighten up the story (I swear, that’s a technical term) a good deal and make certain elements a little clearer. You will find the new draft in place of the old draft, and for the time being the old draft is not available. I may at some point create a category for original drafts of stories that have been revised, but it won’t be today!
Note: The story is now in its third major revision. Thanks to everyone who’s helped in the critique of this piece!